Wednesday, 15 July 2026

Writing Task 1: Line Chart Adverb.

 IELTS Line Chart 要拿 6–6.5,真正需要會用的大約只有 8個核心副詞;另外4個看得懂即可。

一張圖先搞懂:副詞其實只有兩種功能

① 變化「有多大」?— Amount

小幅               中等            大幅                極大幅
▁▂                ▁▃             ▁▆                   ▁█
slightly      moderately   significantly           dramatically
marginally                                         considerably
                                                   substantially
程度Adverb中文
很小    slightly      輕微地、小幅地
很小   marginally      極小幅地
中等  moderately      適度地、中等幅度地
很大  significantly      顯著地
很大  considerably      相當大幅度地
很大  substantially      大幅地
非常大  dramatically      劇烈地、大幅地

例句

Sales increased slightly from 50 to 55.
銷售額從50小幅上升至55。

Sales increased significantly from 50 to 85.
銷售額從50顯著上升至85。

Sales rose dramatically from 50 to 120.
銷售額從50劇烈上升至120。


② 線「怎麼移動」?— Speed and pattern

緩慢              穩定              快速/陡峭               不規則
▁▁▂▂▃             ▁▂▃▄▅             ▁▁▂▇█                 ▂▇▃▆▁▅
gradually        steadily        rapidly / sharply     erratically
Adverb真正意思圖形感覺
gradually緩慢、逐漸地    慢慢上升或下降
steadily穩定、持續地   平順地朝同一方向
rapidly快速地   短時間內快速改變
sharply急劇、陡峭地      線條突然變陡
erratically不規則地   忽高忽低、沒有規律

最容易搞混的三組

1. significantly ≠ rapidly

significantly

表示變化幅度很大,不一定很快。

2010                          2020
▁────▂────▃────▄────▆

The figure increased significantly over the ten-year period.

十年間增加很多,但可能是慢慢增加。

rapidly

表示變化速度很快,重點是時間短。

2010    2011
▁──────█

The figure increased rapidly in 2011.


2. gradually ≠ slightly

gradually

表示變化慢慢發生,最後可能增加很多。

▁──▂──▃──▄──▅──▆──█

The population increased gradually from 1 million to 5 million.

雖然最後增加很多,但過程很慢。

slightly

表示最後的變化量很小

▁────────▂

The population increased slightly from 1 million to 1.1 million.


3. steadily ≠ slowly

steadily 是穩定,不一定慢。

穩定上升:
▁▂▃▄▅▆▇

不穩定上升:
▁▅▂▆▄▇█

Sales rose steadily throughout the period.

代表銷售額持續、平穩上升,中間沒有明顯下跌。


單一 Line Chart 的全部常見變化

1. 小幅上升

▁──────▂

The figure rose slightly from 50 to 55.

2. 逐漸上升

▁──▂──▃──▄──▅

The figure increased gradually over the period.

3. 穩定上升

▁▂▃▄▅▆▇

The figure grew steadily between 2010 and 2015.

4. 急劇上升

▁────▂──█

The figure rose sharply to 100.

5. 大幅上升

▁────────█

The figure increased significantly from 20 to 90.

6. 小幅下降

▇──────▆

The figure fell slightly from 80 to 75.

7. 逐漸下降

▇──▆──▅──▄──▃

The figure declined gradually over the period.

8. 急劇下降

█──▇────▁

The figure fell sharply to 20.

9. 保持穩定

────────────

The figure remained stable at around 50.

或:

The figure remained unchanged at 50.

10. 波動

▂──▆──▃──▇──▄

The figure fluctuated between 40 and 70.

如果波動非常不規則:

The figure fluctuated erratically throughout the period.

11. 上升後持平

▁──▃──▆────────

The figure increased to 80 and then levelled off.

12. 到達高峰

▁──▃──▆──█──▆

The figure peaked at 100 in 2018.

注意:不能寫 peaked to 100

正確是:

peaked at 100

13. 降到最低點

█──▆──▃──▁──▃

The figure reached a low of 20 in 2018.

也可以寫:

The figure bottomed out at 20.


形容詞和副詞的轉換

這是 Task 1 最重要的兩種句型。

動詞+副詞

Sales increased significantly.

VerbAdverb
increasedslightly
rosesteadily
grewgradually
fellsharply
declineddramatically

形容詞+名詞

There was a significant increase in sales.

AdjectiveNoun
a slightincrease
a steadyrise
a gradualgrowth
a sharpfall
a dramaticdecline

對照記憶

Verb+adverbAdjective+noun
rose slightlya slight rise
increased graduallya gradual increase
grew steadilysteady growth
fell sharplya sharp fall
declined dramaticallya dramatic decline
increased significantlya significant increase

你只需要背這8個

描述幅度

  1. slightly:小幅
  2. significantly:顯著、大幅
  3. dramatically:劇烈、非常大幅

描述方式

  1. gradually:逐漸
  2. steadily:穩定持續
  3. rapidly:快速
  4. sharply:急劇、陡峭
  5. erratically:不規則

其他四個只要看懂:

marginally、moderately、considerably、substantially

考試最安全的選擇法

看到線後問三個問題:

1. 上升、下降還是波動?
             ↓
2. 變化量小還是大?
   slightly / significantly / dramatically
             ↓
3. 過程慢、穩定還是突然?
   gradually / steadily / sharply

例如,線在五年內平順地從20上升到80:

The figure increased steadily from 20 to 80.

線在一年內從20突然升到80:

The figure rose sharply from 20 to 80.

線只從20升到22:

The figure increased slightly from 20 to 22.

Band 6–6.5 完全不需要每一句換一個新副詞。 一篇使用兩到四個準確的副詞,就已經比塞滿十幾個卻用錯更安全。

少了quickly consistently considerably substantially

對,你抓得很準,這四個確實要補進來。尤其 considerablysubstantially 在 IELTS Task 1 很常見。

修正版:Line Chart 常用副詞共 12 個

A. 描述「變化幅度」有多大

程度副詞中文例句
很小slightly小幅地Sales rose slightly.
極小marginally極小幅地The figure increased marginally.
中等moderately中等幅度地Prices grew moderately.
大幅significantly顯著地Sales increased significantly.
大幅considerably相當大幅地The number fell considerably.
大幅substantially大幅、實質地Profits rose substantially.
極大幅dramatically劇烈地The rate declined dramatically.

幅度圖示

marginally / slightly
20 ───── 23
小幅變化

moderately
20 ───── 40
中度變化

significantly / considerably / substantially
20 ───── 80
大幅變化

dramatically
20 ───── 120
極大或劇烈變化

B. 描述「變化速度或方式」

副詞中文重點
gradually逐漸地變化慢慢發生
steadily穩定持續地線平順、方向一致
consistently一貫、持續一致地每個時期都呈現相同方向或表現
quickly快速地日常、直接的「快」
rapidly迅速地比 quickly 正式,Task 1較常用
sharply急劇地短時間內形成陡峭變化
erratically不規則地忽高忽低、沒有穩定規律

等等,這樣總數不是12,而是:

  • 幅度副詞:7個
  • 速度/方式副詞:7個

合計 14個常用副詞


四個新增字的差異

1. quickly 與 rapidly

兩個都是「快速地」。

10 ── 15 ───────── 80
        短時間快速上升

The figure increased quickly.

文法正確,但比較口語。

The figure increased rapidly.

較正式,更適合 IELTS Task 1。

因此考試優先使用:

rapidly

不過,quickly 並沒有錯。


2. consistently 與 steadily

這兩個很接近,但焦點不同。

steadily:線條穩定、平順地移動

20 ─ 30 ─ 40 ─ 50 ─ 60

Sales increased steadily between 2010 and 2015.

強調沒有明顯波動,線持續平順上升。

consistently:每個時期都維持一致表現

2010  2011  2012  2013
 70    72    71    73
始終維持較高水準

Company A performed consistently better than Company B.

A公司在各時期都持續優於B公司。

因此,在單一線條持續上升時,通常:

rose steadily 更自然。

consistently 常用於:

remained consistently high
consistently exceeded
performed consistently well

例如:

The unemployment rate remained consistently low throughout the period.


3. considerably

意思是:

相當大幅地、明顯地

30 ───────── 85

The number of visitors increased considerably from 30,000 to 85,000.

它和 significantly 很接近。

  • significantly:顯著地
  • considerably:相當大幅地

在 Task 1 中通常可以互換:

increased significantly
increased considerably


4. substantially

意思是:

大幅地、實質地

20 ───────── 90

Household spending rose substantially during the period.

它也和 significantlyconsiderably 接近,但語氣比較正式。

副詞大致中文IELTS感覺
significantly顯著地最常用、最安全
considerably相當大幅地自然、正式
substantially大幅且實質地正式
dramatically劇烈地程度最強,不要濫用

完整14個副詞整理

幅度大小

小
marginally
slightly

中
moderately

大
significantly
considerably
substantially

非常大
dramatically

速度與方式

慢慢地
gradually

穩定地
steadily

持續一致地
consistently

快速地
quickly
rapidly

急劇地
sharply

不規則地
erratically

最重要:副詞可以描述不同面向

某些副詞可以一起使用,因為一個描述「幅度」,另一個描述「速度」。

例如:

Sales increased gradually but significantly from 20 to 80.

意思是:

  • gradually:上升過程很慢
  • significantly:最後總增幅很大

又例如:

The figure fell rapidly and substantially in 2020.

  • rapidly:下降得快
  • substantially:下降幅度大

但考試時不要為了炫技一口氣塞兩三個副詞。最安全的寫法通常是:

The figure rose steadily from 20 to 70.

或:

The figure increased considerably, reaching 70 in 2020.

你的 Band 6–6.5 核心只要熟練這10個就夠:

slightly, significantly, considerably, substantially, dramatically, gradually, steadily, consistently, rapidly, sharply

Writing Task 1. Practice

 

Model answer
The two plans show that there were a number of small but important changes to the ground floor of a museum between 1990 and 2010.

The general design remained the same, with the entrance and stairs in the same place, although the entrance was widened and certain areas were used for different purposes. 

The most noticeable alteration was the removal of the Archaeology Gallery. This was replaced with two new areas: a poster display space and a children’s interactive zone. The Natural History and Local History rooms stayed the same size and in the same location, but one wall of the latter was knocked down, making it more open. 

The museum office was unchanged but the reception counter was enlarged and moved closer to the entrance. The original gift shop was expanded to include a café. The statue which in 1990 was next to the staircase was moved to the centre of the floor. A lift was added in the space between the Gift Shop and the Natural History Room.

我會給這篇 Band 7.0 左右,合理評分區間是 6.5–7.5。IELTS Task 1 官方採用四項標準:Task Achievement、Coherence and Cohesion、Lexical Resource、Grammatical Range and Accuracy。

評分項目估計分數判斷
Task Achievement7–8有清楚的 overview,也涵蓋考古展區、兒童區、海報區、咖啡禮品店、電梯、雕像及接待櫃檯等主要變化。
Coherence & Cohesion6–7資訊順序合理,但看起來全部寫成一大段;若考試時沒有分段,會影響分數。
Lexical Resource7alteration, was replaced with, was enlarged, was knocked down 等地圖題字彙準確,但詞彙變化尚未達到 Band 8。
Grammar7有使用複合句、被動語態和關係子句,錯誤很少,但句型仍可以更多樣。

為什麼很可能是 7.0?

優點是 170字左右,超過最低150字要求,而且沒有加入個人意見。
Overview 也寫得很清楚:

The general design remained the same… although the entrance was widened and certain areas were used for different purposes.

主要設施的改變幾乎都有提到,內容也大致準確。

但有三個小地方限制它升到 Band 8:

  1. 段落不明顯
    最好分成四段:Introduction、Overview、Body 1、Body 2。若真的全部寫成一段,Coherence and Cohesion 可能只有6分。
  2. 第一句略顯空泛

    small but important changes

    實際上考古展覽館被完全移除,還新增兒童互動區、海報區、咖啡廳和電梯,改變不算很小。可以改成:

    The museum underwent several significant changes between 1990 and 2010.

  3. 關係子句需要逗號
    原句:

    The statue which in 1990 was next to the staircase was moved…

    更自然、準確的版本:

    The statue, which had previously stood next to the staircase, was moved to the centre of the museum.

最終判斷

有正常分段:Band 7.0,甚至可能接近7.5。
完全沒有分段:大概仍是7.0,但也可能被壓到6.5。

對你的目標 IELTS Writing 6.0–6.5 而言,這是一篇很值得模仿的安全範文;不需要硬塞艱深單字,重點是 overview 清楚、位置準確、變化完整。

This two plans displayed the museum’s layout of the ground floor in 1990, 2010 Over all , there were 7 places and layouts different and 3 areas no changed between the ground floor of the museum 1990 and 2010. Firstly, giftshop block extended to added cafe ,on the below added a Lift; the old archaeology gallery has divided to children’s interactive zone and poster display area. The 2010 entrance more widely than 1990, the Statue also moved to the center, both local history room and Natural history room without any changed 我寫的有幾分 並指出我的問題謝謝

我會估這篇目前約 Band 4.0,寬鬆一點可能 4.5。不是因為你看不懂圖,而是字數、文法與句子完整性嚴重拉低分數。

你目前大約只有 90字,Task 1 要求至少 150字

評分項目估計主要原因
Task Achievement4不足150字;有抓到部分變化,但漏掉接待櫃檯和辦公室等資訊,也有一處描述不完全準確
Coherence & Cohesion4有 introduction、overview 和細節,但句子之間常用逗號硬接,段落發展不足
Lexical Resource4知道 extended, divided, moved 等字,但搭配和詞性錯誤較多
Grammar3–4缺少動詞、被動語態錯誤、單複數和比較級問題頻繁
整體4.0最大問題是字數不足和文法錯誤

逐句修改

1. Introduction

你的句子:

This two plans displayed the museum’s layout of the ground floor in 1990, 2010.

問題:

  • This two plansThese two plans
  • 圖表題通常使用現在式 show,不是 displayed
  • 1990, 2010 中間要用 and

修改:

These two plans show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and 2010.

更自然的版本:

The two plans illustrate how the ground floor of a museum changed between 1990 and 2010.


2. Overview

你的句子:

Over all, there were 7 places and layouts different and 3 areas no changed...

問題:

  • Over allOverall
  • places and layouts different 文法不成立
  • no changedremained unchanged
  • Overview 不建議數「7個改變、3個不變」,很容易算錯,也不是真正的整體趨勢
  • between the museum 1990 and 2010 缺少介系詞

應該概括最大的改變:

Overall, although the general layout remained similar, several new facilities were added. The archaeology gallery was replaced, while the gift shop was expanded to include a café.

這樣才是 IELTS 要的 overview。


3. Gift shop、lift、archaeology gallery

你的句子:

Firstly, giftshop block extended to added cafe, on the below added a Lift; the old archaeology gallery has divided...

問題很多:

  • giftshopgift shop
  • 缺少冠詞:The gift shop
  • 要用被動語態:was extended
  • to addedto include
  • cafe 前面要有 a
  • on the below 不自然
  • has divided 時態和被動語態錯誤
  • divide todivide into
  • 這裡更準確的說法是 was replaced by,因為考古展覽區消失了

修改:

Firstly, the gift shop was expanded to include a café, and a lift was installed below it. The former archaeology gallery was replaced by a children’s interactive zone and a poster display area.

was expanded to include 是地圖題非常好用的句型。


4. Entrance、statue、history rooms

你的句子:

The 2010 entrance more widely than 1990, the Statue also moved to the center...

問題:

  • 缺少動詞 was
  • widely 是副詞;這裡需要形容詞比較級 wider
  • 要寫 in 2010in 1990
  • Statue 不需要大寫
  • moved 要使用被動語態:was moved
  • without any changedremained unchanged
  • Natural History Room 不需要每個字都大寫,除非完全照圖例標題
  • 不能一直使用逗號連接完整句子

修改:

The entrance was wider in 2010 than it had been in 1990, while the statue was moved to the centre of the museum. The natural history room remained unchanged.

但是你這裡有一個內容準確度問題

both local history room and Natural history room without any changed

自然史展覽室確實大致沒變,但地方歷史室雖然位置和面積相同,其中一面牆被移除,因此變得更開放

可以寫:

The natural history room remained unchanged, while part of the wall of the local history room was removed, making the area more open.

你目前最需要修正的四件事

第一,一定要寫到150字以上,建議控制在 160–180字

第二,地圖題大量使用被動語態:

  • was expanded
  • was replaced
  • was added
  • was moved
  • was removed
  • remained unchanged

第三,不要用逗號連接很多完整句子。你的第三段和第四段都有明顯的 run-on sentences。

第四,Overview 不要列數字,應該說明:

  • 整體格局是否改變
  • 最大的改變是什麼
  • 新增或移除了哪些主要設施

依照你的原文改成 Band 6–6.5 版本

The two plans illustrate how the ground floor of a museum changed between 1990 and 2010.

Overall, although the general layout of the museum remained similar, several facilities were added or used for different purposes. The most significant change was the replacement of the archaeology gallery with two new areas.

In 1990, the gift shop was located in the north-western corner of the museum. By 2010, it had been expanded to include a café. In addition, a lift was installed between this area and the natural history room. The former archaeology gallery on the eastern side was replaced by a children’s interactive zone and a poster display area.

The entrance was widened, while the reception counter was enlarged and moved closer to it. The statue, which had previously been situated near the stairs, was relocated to the centre of the museum. The museum office and natural history room remained unchanged. Although the local history room stayed in the same location, part of its wall was removed, making the room more open.

這篇約 165字,內容完整,文法安全,大約可達 Band 6.5。你原本其實已經看出主要變化,現在最重要的是把「看懂圖」轉換成完整、正確的英文句子

These two plans illustrate how the ground floor of a museum changed between 1990 and 2010.

Overall , although the general layout of the museum remained similar. serveral facilities were added or used for different purposes. The most significant change was the replacement of the archaeology gallery with two new areas.

In 1990, the gift shop was located in the north-western corner of the museum. By 2010, it had been expanded to include a cafe. In addition, a lift was installed between this area and the Natural history room. The former archaeology gallery on the eastern side was replaced by a children's interactive zone and a poster display area.
 
The entrance was widened, while the reception counter was enlarged and moved closer to it . The stature, which had previously been situated near the stairs. was relocated to the centre of the museum. The museum office and natural history room remained unchanged. Although the local history room stayed in the same location, part of its wall was removed, making the room more open. 

從model answer 來看 加上 我錯誤修改過的 這樣 的6-6.5的新的一篇要怎麼寫

可以。這一篇我會刻意用你原本看圖的內容,再加上 model answer 裡的重要資訊,但不寫得太難,目標放在 Band 6–6.5

Band 6–6.5 新版本

The two plans illustrate the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and 2010.

Overall, the basic arrangement of the museum remained similar, but several areas were changed and some new facilities were added. The most noticeable change was that the archaeology gallery was replaced by a children’s interactive zone and a poster display area.

In the north-west corner, the gift shop was enlarged to include a café. A lift was also added between this area and the natural history room. The stairs stayed in the same place, while the statue was moved from beside the stairs to the centre of the museum.

Near the entrance, the reception counter became larger and was moved closer to the doorway. The entrance itself was also widened. The museum office and the natural history room remained unchanged. The local history room stayed in the same position, although part of its wall was removed, making the room more open.

字數:158字


這篇是怎麼從你的版本改出來的

你的第一句:

This two plans displayed the museum’s layout...

改成:

The two plans illustrate the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and 2010.

這一句只需要記住:

The two plans illustrate...


你的 Overview 原本寫:

there were 7 places and layouts different and 3 areas no changed

這種數「七個改變、三個不變」很容易寫錯,也不像 IELTS 的 overview。

改成兩個整體特徵:

Overall, the basic arrangement of the museum remained similar, but several areas were changed and some new facilities were added.

再補上最重要的變化:

The most noticeable change was that the archaeology gallery was replaced by a children’s interactive zone and a poster display area.

這樣 overview 就完整了。


你的原句:

giftshop block extended to added cafe

改成:

The gift shop was enlarged to include a café.

這裡要記一組:

was enlarged to include

意思是「被擴建,並加入……」。


你的原句:

on the below added a Lift

改成:

A lift was also added between this area and the natural history room.

地圖題最安全的方式是直接寫:

A lift was added...


你的原句:

the old archaeology gallery has divided to...

改成:

The archaeology gallery was replaced by a children’s interactive zone and a poster display area.

這裡不要用 divided,因為原本的考古展覽館消失了,最準確的是:

A was replaced by B.


你的原句:

The 2010 entrance more widely than 1990

改成:

The entrance itself was also widened.

這比寫比較級更安全。

你也可以寫:

The entrance was wider in 2010 than in 1990.

但地圖題用被動語態 was widened 更自然。


你的原句:

the Statue also moved to the center

改成:

The statue was moved from beside the stairs to the centre of the museum.

要注意:

  • statue 不需要大寫
  • 它不是自己移動,所以要寫 was moved
  • 地圖題最好寫出 from A to B

你可以直接記住的地圖題骨架

第一段:改寫題目

The two plans illustrate the layout of ______ in 1990 and 2010.

第二段:Overview

Overall, the basic layout remained similar, but several areas were changed and some new facilities were added.
The most noticeable change was that ______ was replaced by ______.

第三、四段:詳細比較

The ______ was enlarged to include ______.
A ______ was added between ______ and ______.
The ______ was moved from ______ to ______.
The ______ remained unchanged.
Although the ______ stayed in the same position, ______.

你這次其實不是不會看圖。你已經抓到大部分主要變化,只是原本直接用中文邏輯翻成英文。現在這一版是在保留你的觀察之下,把它換成考官容易理解、能拿到 6–6.5 的句型。

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