Overall, the percentage of population about Newspaper was slightly decreased, people going on the Internet have more significantly growing up in three years. Both the percentage of population of two medias about Television were marginally in higher percentage and opposite Radio were consistently changed in lower proportion in three years.
There were highest nearly 80% percentage of population watched news from Television in the 2013 and the lowest about 21% people accessed the printable Newspapers in the 2017. The same lower about 30% are Radio population of three years. Coincidence, there were same about 70% between the rate of Television and Internet in 2017. There were five bars equal about 30% proportion of population which were accessed news of Newspaper in 2015, Internet in 2013, three years of Radio.
David，這篇目前大約是 Band 5.0。你其實看懂了主要趨勢，但大量文法與搭配錯誤讓意思不夠清楚，暫時還沒到 6.0–6.5。
| 評分項目 | 估計 |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement | 5.0 |
| Coherence & Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammar | 4.5 |
| Overall | 約 5.0 |
你寫了 152 words，剛好達標，但太危險；建議寫 165–180 words。
你觀察正確的地方：
- Television 在2013年最高，接近80%。
- Internet 從約30%大幅增加至70%。
- Internet 和 Television 在2017年約同為70%。
- Radio 三年都維持在30%左右。
需要修正的重點：
| 你的寫法 | 問題 | 正確表達 |
|---|---|---|
| This bar chart show | 主詞單數 | The bar chart shows |
| four types of medias | media已是複數 | four types of media |
| was slightly decreased | 不用被動；而且40%降到20%不是小幅 | fell substantially |
| significantly growing up | grow up表示人長大 | rose significantly |
| Radio were consistently changed | 數字幾乎沒變 | Radio remained broadly stable |
| printable Newspapers | printable表示「可以列印的」 | printed newspapers |
| in the 2017 | 年份前不用the | in 2017 |
| Coincidence | 詞性及用法錯誤 | Coincidentally,／直接省略 |
你的 via 用得沒有錯，意思是「透過」；例如：
people accessing news via the Internet
不過本題使用 through four different types of media 會更自然。
Band 6.5 Model Answer（172 words）
The bar chart compares the percentages of people in one country who accessed news through four different types of media in 2013, 2015 and 2017.
Overall, television was the most popular source of news at the beginning of the period, while Internet use increased dramatically and caught up with television by 2017. In contrast, the proportion of people reading printed newspapers fell steadily, whereas the figure for radio remained almost unchanged.
In 2013, nearly 80% of the population obtained news from television, compared with 40% for printed newspapers. The television figure then fell to approximately 67% in 2015 before recovering slightly to 70% in 2017. Newspaper readership moved in the opposite direction, declining from 40% in 2013 to 30% in 2015 and just 20% in 2017.
Just over 30% of people accessed news online in 2013, a figure similar to that for radio. Internet use then rose to around 40% in 2015 and surged to about 70% in 2017. By comparison, radio use stayed broadly stable at approximately 30% throughout the period.
最後一句「five bars equal about 30%」數據大致看對了，但不值得寫。它只是數柱子，並非重要趨勢，IELTS更希望你比較「上升、下降、穩定及交叉追上」。
